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What lessons can we learn from studying the past?

What lessons can we learn from studying the past? WydAb
I think we can learn a lot of things from the past. It enables us to develop a better understanding of the world in which we live. Ancient generations have left us valuable experiences that we should refer to. For example, through past wars, we learn that the most precious thing is peace and freedom. Therefore, we will appreciate the peace and freedom that we have in the present even more. One more thing is that based on the experiences that the old generations left us, we can map out the right strategies and policies to protect and develop our country.
I
think
we can learn
a lot of
things from the past. It enables us to develop a better understanding of the world in which we
live
. Ancient generations have
left
us valuable experiences that we should refer to.
For example
, through past wars, we learn that the most precious thing is peace and freedom.
Therefore
, we will appreciate the peace and freedom that we have in the present even more. One more thing is that based on the experiences that the
old
generations
left
us, we can map out the right strategies and policies to protect and develop our country.
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IELTS academic What lessons can we learn from studying the past?

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  American English
1 paragraphs
101 words
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Coherence and Cohesion: 5.5
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