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What lessons can we learn from studying the past?

What lessons can we learn from studying the past? WydAb

I think we can learn a lot of things from the past. It enables us to develop a better understanding of the world in which we live. Ancient generations have left us valuable experiences that we should refer to. For example, through past wars, we learn that the most precious thing is peace and freedom. Therefore, we will appreciate the peace and freedom that we have in the present even more. One more thing is that based on the experiences that the old generations left us, we can map out the right strategies and policies to protect and develop our country.

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IELTS academic What lessons can we learn from studying the past?

Academic

American English

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101 words

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Coherence and Cohesion: 5.5

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Grammatical Range: 6.0

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Task Achievement: 7.0

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