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The three pie charts show the distribution of spending between three counties in northern England in 2014.

The three pie charts show the distribution of spending between three counties in northern England in 2014. 7adAb
Of the 3 regions, Yorkshire spent the most on education, followed by Lancashire, and finally Derbyshire. Derbyshire spent the most on leisure, representing about 35%, Yorkshire spent 25% and Lancashire slightly more at 30%. Derbyshire also spent the most on community care, reaching 20%, while the other two spent less, Yorkshire at 18% and Lancashire at 12%. All 3 counties spent a similar proportion on the environment: between 5 and 10%, Derbyshire having the highest amount. Social services expenditure was at 15% for Yorkshire, 10% for Lancashire and just 3% for Derbyshire representing the lowest of the three. Regarding the category of other, the amounts were broadly similar, representing between 7% and 10% for each of the three. Overall amongst the three regions education and leisure make up the largest expenses, followed by the environment and social services representing the lowest.
Of the 3 regions, Yorkshire
spent
the most on education, followed by Lancashire, and
finally
Derbyshire. Derbyshire
spent
the most on leisure, representing about 35%, Yorkshire
spent
25% and Lancashire
slightly
more at 30%. Derbyshire
also
spent
the most on community care, reaching 20%, while the other two
spent
less, Yorkshire at 18% and Lancashire at 12%.

All 3 counties
spent
a similar proportion on the environment: between 5 and 10%, Derbyshire having the highest amount. Social services expenditure was at 15% for Yorkshire, 10% for Lancashire and
just
3% for Derbyshire representing the lowest of the three. Regarding the category of other, the amounts were
broadly
similar, representing between 7% and 10% for each of the three.

Overall
amongst the three regions education and leisure
make
up the largest expenses, followed by the environment and social services representing the lowest.
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IELTS academic The three pie charts show the distribution of spending between three counties in northern England in 2014.

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