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The chart below shows the percentage of people giving money to charity in Uk from 1990 to 2010.

The chart below shows the percentage of people giving money to charity in Uk from 1990 to 2010. 6xVGG
The given bar chart illustrates the proportion of humanity who donated money to organization by different age groups in UK between 1990 and 2010. This data has been calibrated in the ratio. Overall, it is clear that although the maximum that of people gave money to charity by 36-50 age group compared to these four categories, whereas in 18-25 group, the lowest percentage of mankind gave money to charitable. Looking at the details, it is evidently seen that with regards to providing cash to firms, in 36-50 age group, merely over two-fifths of men giving money to charitable institution till 1990, while during the 2010, this figure was less slowly to just above a third. However, there was a decrease in that of individuals supply money to aid, with figures under a fifth in former year, after twenty decades to only 5%. As far as this is a concerned, among the 26-35, 51-65 and 65 over age groups, this trend was relatively the equal to nearly 30% to 35% respectively since 1990, as opposed to in two age stages, it increased slightly by 2010 on the contrary in 26-35 age group, an downward trend can be seen in that of humankind.
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bar chart illustrates the proportion of humanity who donated
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money
to organization by
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different
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age
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groups
in UK between 1990 and 2010. This data has
been calibrated
in the ratio.

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, it is
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clear
that although the maximum that of
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people
gave
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money
to charity by 36-50
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age
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group
compared to these four categories, whereas in 18-25
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group
, the lowest percentage of mankind gave
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money
to charitable.

Looking at the
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details
, it is
evidently
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seen
that
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with regards to
providing cash to firms, in 36-50
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age
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group
,
merely
over two-fifths of
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men
giving
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money
to charitable institution till 1990, while during the 2010, this figure was less
slowly
to
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just
above a third.
However
, there was a decrease in that of individuals supply
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money
to aid, with figures under a fifth in former year, after twenty decades to
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only
5%. As far as this is a concerned, among the 26-35, 51-65 and 65 over
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age
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groups
, this trend was
relatively
the equal to
nearly
30% to 35%
respectively
since 1990, as opposed to in two
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age
stages, it increased
slightly
by 2010
on the contrary
in 26-35
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age
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group
,
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an
downward trend can be
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seen
in that of humankind.
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IELTS academic The chart below shows the percentage of people giving money to charity in Uk from 1990 to 2010.

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