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what are the differences between two map in 2007 and 2010

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Two maps illustrate the way to get to a city hospital of two different year (2007-2010). According to both maps, the main features which is city hospital is sourrounded by Ring Road. In these two maps, there have been two features that still remained. This two features are City Hospital and staff car park. Apart from these two features there are some features that appear on the map of 2010 are piblic car park which located on the east-side of the city hospital. The further additional features are two around-turn on the hospital Rd. which can lead to the bus station. Overall, there are two major features that never change on both 2007 and 2010 map. These features are city hospital and staff car park. However, there are some additional features that appear on the map of 2010 but not on 2007. These features are public car park, bus station and two around-turns

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hospital
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different
 year (2007-2010). According to both You use this word too often, consider replacing it withpicturesketchoutlinegraphdesignplan
maps
, the main features which is city You use this word too often, consider replacing it withnursing homeclinichospicewardinstitutionemergency room
hospital
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sourrounded
 by Ring Road. In these two You use this word too often, consider replacing it withpicturesketchoutlinegraphdesignplan
maps
, there have been two features that still
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Hospital
 and staff You use this word too often, consider replacing it withwagonvanautobusridemachine
car
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park
. Apart from these two features there are This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:a number of
some
 features that appear on the You use this word too often, consider replacing it withpicturesketchoutlinegraphdesignplan
map
 of 2010 are Possible spelling mistake found.public
piblic
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car
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park
 which located on the east-side of the city You use this word too often, consider replacing it withnursing homeclinichospicewardinstitutionemergency room
hospital
. The further
 additional features are two around-turn on the You use this word too often, consider replacing it withnursing homeclinichospicewardinstitutionemergency room
hospital
 Rd. which can lead to the bus station.

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, there are two major features that never This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :alteradjust
change
 on both 2007 and 2010 You use this word too often, consider replacing it withpicturesketchoutlinegraphdesignplan
map
. These features are city You use this word too often, consider replacing it withnursing homeclinichospicewardinstitutionemergency room
hospital
 and staff You use this word too often, consider replacing it withwagonvanautobusridemachine
car
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park
. However
, there are This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:a number of
some
 additional features that appear on the You use this word too often, consider replacing it withpicturesketchoutlinegraphdesignplan
map
 of 2010 This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:on the contrary
but
 not on 2007. These features are public You use this word too often, consider replacing it withwagonvanautobusridemachine
car
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park
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