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The table shows forested land in millions of hectares in different parts of the world. /Users/elifceylan/Desktop/task 1.jpg

The table shows forested land in millions of hectares in different parts of the world. /Users/elifceylan/Desktop/task 1. jpg 3aWON
The table illustrates that the green areas for 6 different places and those places are Africa, Asia, Europe, North America, Oceania, South America in years 1990, 2000 and 2005. Interestingly, Europe has largest forested land and Ocenia has the smallest land in 1990, 2000 and 2005. At the different point, Europe has top and bottom forested area among the years. Africa, Oceania and South America 's green fields decrease while it is increased in Europe within represented years. On the other side, forested land is 989 million hectares in 1990, however forest area kept in 2000 and 2005 as 705 ha in North America. Similarly, Asia's forested land neither increased nor decreased respectively in given years. Finally, There is closest difference between Africa and North America and both are roughly 700 millions hectares. Likewise, there is around 100 difference between Europe and South America. In 2005, Smallest number of green land is 197 ha and Greatest is 1001ha in Europe and Ocenia respectively
The table illustrates that the green areas for 6
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places and those places are Africa, Asia, Europe, North America, Oceania, South America in years 1990, 2000 and 2005.

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forested
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Ocenia
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the smallest
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in 1990, 2000 and 2005. At the
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point, Europe
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top and bottom forested area among the years.

Africa, Oceania and South America 's green fields decrease while it
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is 989 million hectares in 1990,
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in 2000 and 2005 as 705 ha in North America.
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neither increased nor decreased
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Finally
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difference between Africa and North America and both are roughly 700 millions hectares.
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number of green
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is 197 ha and Greatest is 1001ha in Europe and
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