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The diagram below comperes the illicit alcohol sales between three geographic regions

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The diagram illustrate illicit alcohol sales divided into three Geographic regions. To begin with, Eastern Europe in aggreate data for 2 countries and in europe total alcohol consumption 16604059 hl lae and in latin america aggreate data is highest than europe and africa. Total alcohol consumption is 14990777hl lae and in africa 10657163 from that three in higher eastern europe. lllicit alcohol consumption that also higher Europe and smallest hl lae has latin america. However, llicit alcohol sales and share of lllicit alcohol both in higher global alcohol trade sale of alcohol in higher Europe and share alcohol in africa. furthermore fiscal loss in there three country mostly increase in Africa. global alcohol trade compare on three that the latin america aggreate data provide into 14 countries. To conclude, the highest quality of alcohol in all sales representative to the Eastern Europe. loss of this alcohol sales in Africa. in the countries constitution is Latin America
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divided into three Geographic regions.

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both in higher global
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in higher Europe and share
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