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The table shows the amount of spent on healthcare in different countries. Summarise the information by selecting and recording the main features, and make comparisons where revelant.

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The table presents the average dollar amount spent on healthcare in some countries in 2010. There are clear differences in spending between countries around the world. In general, the country with the highest health expenditure is even higher than the average global expenditure. The average medical expenditure of the world was $ 717. Asian countries spent a lot of money on health service, such as Japan ranked the first with nearly $2, 690. Singapore at $ 1, 035 was closely as high as South Korea at $1, 187. Compared with global average spending, Middle East countries like Bahrain and Kuwait, are still greater than the moderate. In contrast, Latin American spent under the medium of the world. The least spending is Brazil which the last ranked, it was less than six times the amount in comparison with the highest position, spent by Japan. Neither Argentina nor Chile exceeded the world average spending, with $ 551 and $ 473 respectively.
The table presents the
average
dollar amount spent on healthcare in
some


countries in 2010. There are
clear
differences in
spending
between countries

around the world.
In general
, the country with the highest health expenditure is

even higher than the
average
global expenditure.

The
average
medical expenditure of the world was
$ 717
. Asian countries spent

a lot of
money on health service, such as Japan ranked the
first
with
nearly


$2, 690. Singapore at
$ 1
, 035 was
closely
as high as South Korea at $1, 187.

Compared with global
average
spending
, Middle East countries like Bahrain and

Kuwait, are
still
greater than the moderate.
In contrast
, Latin American spent

under the medium of the world. The least
spending
is Brazil which the last

ranked, it was less than six times the amount
in comparison
with the highest

position, spent by Japan. Neither Argentina nor Chile exceeded the world

average
spending
, with
$ 551
and
$ 473
respectively
.
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