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what are the changes at the seaside resort of Templeton between 1990 and 2005?

what are the changes at the seaside resort of Templeton between 1990 and 2005? QLKw3

The map illustrates planes place at the seaside resort of Templeton between 1990 and 2005. This is the same place with an interval in time of 15 years. On top of the map is shown 1990 where there is one five-story building, the city school, railway station and 16 private houses, also 2 bridges over the river and 3 roads. At the bottom of the map, 2005 shows already 6 five-story houses, 3 bridges across the river, a supermarket, factory. Private houses decreased by 4. Trees abate by 16. But the lake remained as large and the number of roads doubled. Furthermore, riverbed has not decreased over 15 years due to the nearest plant. However, the view of the body of water (presumably the sea) in 2055 was closed by five-story houses. And the beach on the shore became impossible due to the railway. So, for 15 years place on the map has changed a lot.

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 place at the seaside resort of Templeton between 1990 and 2005. This is the same place with an interval in time of 15 years.

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. And the beach on the shore became impossible due to the railway.

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