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what age they consider that rights for marriage and voting should be allowed

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The bar chart illustrates the results of a study of a thousand adults in five different states in which they were asked at what age they consider that rights for marriage and voting should be allowed as well as responsibilities to be trialled in a court of law should be granted to young people. In general, the answers those adults are given were varied in each country. In Japan, for instance, they believed 22 years old is the proper age to get married. However, in some developed countries such as the USA and the UK when a person reaches their mature age (18 years old) they could be granted such rights. In addition, adults in Egypt and Mexico tough that marriage at 16 years old was not a problem. In terms of voting, adolescents in the UK and Mexico believe 16 years old is an appropriate age to be authorized, while people in the USA, Egypt, and Japan believed that an individual should be around 18 years old or more to get permission. Moreover, for young people who commit a crime, Japan's adults argue the trial can be sentenced if someone is already 18 years old. In contrast, people in the USA believed that at the age of 12, a teenager can be trialled in a court law if they are proven guilty. Based on correspondences in the UK and Mexico, the youngest age to take such responsibilities should be 15 years old and 14 years old in Egypt.
The bar chart illustrates the results of a study of a thousand
adults
in five
different
states in which they
were asked
at what
age
they consider that rights for marriage and voting should be
allowed
as well
as responsibilities to be
trialled
in a court of law should
be granted
to young
people
.
In general
, the answers those
adults
are
given
were varied
in each country.

In Japan,
for instance
, they believed 22 years
old
is the proper
age
to
get
married.
However
, in
some
developed countries
such as the USA and the UK when a person reaches their mature
age
(18 years
old)
they could
be granted
such rights.
In addition
,
adults
in Egypt and Mexico tough that marriage at 16 years
old
was not a problem.

In terms of voting, adolescents in the UK and Mexico believe 16 years
old
is an appropriate
age
to
be authorized
, while
people
in the USA, Egypt, and Japan believed that an individual should be around 18 years
old
or more to
get
permission.
Moreover
, for young
people
who commit a crime, Japan's
adults
argue the trial can
be sentenced
if someone is already 18 years
old
.
In contrast
,
people
in the USA believed that at the
age
of 12, a
teenager
can be
trialled
in a court law if they
are proven
guilty. Based on correspondences in the UK and Mexico, the youngest
age
to take such responsibilities should be 15 years
old
and 14 years
old
in Egypt.
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IELTS academic what age they consider that rights for marriage and voting should be allowed

Academic
  American English
3 paragraphs
249 words
6.0
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 7.0
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