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The graphs give information about computer ownership as a percentage of the population between 2002 and 2010, and by level of education for the years 2002 and 2010.

The graphs give information about computer ownership as a percentage of the population between 2002 and 2010, and by level of education for the years 2002 and 2010. ypO3
The graphs compares and contrast the data on the change in the percentage of computer owners and level of education over 8-year period starting in 2002. Overall, during 8 years the computer ownership constantly increased. Moreover, the highest percent related to the owners with postgraduate qualification, while people without high school diploma had the lowest percent. In the 2002, the percentage of computer ownership was less tha 60 %. From the 2002 to 2010 the percentage of computer users increased gradually and ammounted about 70 %. It is noticeable, that the highest ratio were among the people with postgraduated education. In the begining of the period it made up slightly over 70 %. However, by 2010 the percent of computer owners grew until 90 %. In contrast, only 15 % of people without high education owned computers in 2002. Nevertheless to the end of the period it dramatically rised and reached 40 %, it still stood the lowest percent.
The graphs
compares
and contrast the data on the
change
in the percentage of computer owners and level of education over 8-year period starting in 2002.

Overall
, during 8 years the computer ownership
constantly
increased.
Moreover
, the highest percent related to the owners with postgraduate qualification, while
people
without high school diploma had the lowest percent.

In the 2002, the percentage of computer ownership was less
tha
60 %. From the 2002 to 2010 the percentage of computer users increased
gradually
and
ammounted
about 70 %.

It is noticeable, that the highest ratio were among the
people
with
postgraduated
education. In the
begining
of the period it made up
slightly
over 70 %.
However
, by 2010 the percent of computer owners grew until 90 %.
In contrast
,
only
15 % of
people
without high education
owned
computers in 2002.
Nevertheless
to the
end
of the period it
dramatically
rised
and reached 40 %, it
still
stood the lowest percent.
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