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The chart below shows the number of men and women in further education in Britain in three periods and whether they were studying full-time or part-time. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

The chart below shows the number of men and women in further education in Britain in three periods and whether they were studying full-time or part-time. rB5l
The bar graph provide the data on the male and female going for further education as a part-timer or full time in London from 1970 to 1990. To embark with, the trend for part-time studies are high in Britain. In 1970 around 10 lakhs male pupils were gaining higher studies as a half time, In contrast, only one-tenth goes for full time. however, in about 700 women candidates for part-time and 100 for full time. furthermore, in the next 10 years there is a downfall in male undergraduate by 20%. butt un female students there is an upward trend it increases by 20%(850). To add on, there is a dramatic increase in the number of female trainees. In the year 1990. The number of female increase from 850 to 1100for part-time and slightly uplift in full time and reached to 250. Moreover, in their is also slight inclined in male department. Fulltime had increased between 250 and 350 in 10 years and about 850 to 900 in part-time. overall, it can be observed that there were an upward trend in female trainees in both the department whereas, there are ups and sown in male candidate.
The bar graph provide the data on the male and
female
going for
further
education as a part-timer or
full
time
in London from 1970 to 1990.

To embark with, the trend for part-time studies are high in Britain. In 1970 around 10 lakhs male pupils were gaining higher studies as a half
time
,
In contrast
,
only
one-tenth goes for
full
time
.
however
, in about 700 women candidates for part-time and 100 for
full
time
.
furthermore
, in the
next
10 years there is a downfall in male undergraduate by 20%.
butt
un
female
students there is an upward trend it increases by 20%(850).

To
add
on, there is a dramatic increase in the number of
female
trainees. In the year 1990. The number of
female
increase from 850 to 1100for part-time and
slightly
uplift in
full
time
and reached to 250.
Moreover
, in
their
is
also
slight inclined in male department.
Fulltime
had increased between 250 and 350 in 10 years and about 850 to 900 in part-time.

overall
, it can
be observed
that there were an upward trend in
female
trainees in both the department whereas, there are ups and sown in male candidate.
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IELTS academic The chart below shows the number of men and women in further education in Britain in three periods and whether they were studying full-time or part-time.

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