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The bar chart below show about the average children born per woman in 5 countries in 1970 and to 2000

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The bar graph the bar chart illustrate the information about the birth rate in five different nations namely India Thailand Mexico Spain and small Diya overall in Mexico the birth rate did not change over the given period of time whereas India Thailand and Spain showed a significant downward trend in the birth rate assured upward trend in the number of children born for women in 1978 in India only 5. 2 children were born by per women which accounted as a highest number of children child birth in India where has the lowest number of childbirth in Spain which was a counted as a two children for women Mexico and Maria had between 3 and 2. 3. 2 birth per woman Thailand near about 4. 5 childbirth by per women in 2000 in India and Spain approximately similar number of childbirth by per women about 1. 5 and 1. 2 respectively while the birth rate in Somalia and been increased by which was accounted as a 3. 5 child birth in India and Spain women were give birth to only three children
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IELTS academic The bar chart below show about the average children born per woman in 5 countries in 1970 and to 2000

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