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We can see from the chart that it provides information on eating habits of people in the USA. If we look at the overall information it is evident that sodium is the most consumed. It is generally true to say that consumption plays a vital role in well being of a person.

We can see from the chart that it provides information on eating habits of people in the USA. If we look at the overall information it is evident that sodium is the most consumed. It is generally true to say that consumption plays a vital role in well being of a person. dpe5X
We can see from the chart that it provides information on eating habits of people in the USA. If we look at the overall information it is evident that sodium is the most consumed. It is generally true to say that consumption plays a vital role in well being of a person. Except sugar, sodium and fat are the most consumed nutrients in dinner. A striking point is sugar is consumed in huge quantity during snacks time at 42% respectively. The least contribute is breakfast in sodium, fat and sugar at 14%, 16% and 16% respectively. Lunch is the most contributed after dinner. Dinner is the most unhealthy meal for the citizens in the USA. Sodium intake during breakfast and snacks show similar trend. These nutrients are vital on the contrary over consumption can lead to health issues. Sugar intake is on the rise between lunch and dinner. To conclude, it is not a wise choice to eat food items that contain excess sugar and fats.
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overall
information it is evident that sodium is the most consumed. It is
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true to say that consumption plays a vital role in
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Except
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sugar
, sodium and
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are the most consumed nutrients in dinner. A striking point is
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sugar
is consumed
in huge quantity during snacks time at 42%
respectively
. The least contribute is breakfast in sodium,
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fat
and
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sugar
at 14%, 16% and 16%
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. Lunch is the most contributed after dinner.

Dinner is the most unhealthy meal for the citizens in the USA. Sodium intake during breakfast and snacks
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similar trend. These nutrients are vital
on the contrary
over consumption can lead to health issues.
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Sugar
intake is on the rise between lunch and dinner.

To conclude
, it is not a wise choice to eat food items that contain excess
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sugar
and fats.
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IELTS academic We can see from the chart that it provides information on eating habits of people in the USA. If we look at the overall information it is evident that sodium is the most consumed. It is generally true to say that consumption plays a vital role in well being of a person.

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