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The given picture depicts the entire process of making leather products. Overall, it is conspicuous that the process of making leather goods requires seven main stages, beginning with the drying of the animals’ skin and ending with putting it on shelves for sale. Prior to the actual process of making leather marchandises, initially the animal skins are hung and dried and then taken to the factory by specialized vehicles. After it has been washed, it is soaked in a mixture of lime and water, which is then removed. In the next following process, in order to smooth the skin, a special machine is used, after which it is soaked in Tannin, a liquid consisting of both water and vegetable matter. Afterward, the finished product is polished and trucks are used to transport it to a different factory where a variety of leather goods including shoes, bags, and balls will be manufactured.
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products.

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requires seven main stages, beginning with the drying of the animals’ skin and ending with putting it on shelves for sale.

Prior to the actual
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of making
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marchandises
,
initially
the animal skins
are hung
and dried and then taken to the factory by specialized vehicles. After it has
been washed
, it
is soaked
in a mixture of lime and water, which is then removed.

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next
following
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, in order to smooth the skin, a special machine is
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used
, after which it
is soaked
in Tannin, a liquid consisting of both water and vegetable matter. Afterward, the finished product
is polished
and trucks are
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used
to transport it to a
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different
factory where a variety of
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leather
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goods
including shoes, bags, and balls will
be manufactured
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IELTS academic process of making leather products.

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