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How to produce chocolate from Coca Pods

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This illustration shows the process of chocolate production from seeds to factory. Coco plant seeds are used to produce chocolate. After harvesting the pods white coco beans are fermented, and place under the direct sunlight where they become dry due to heat of sun after that packed in large sacks for transportation towards factory. After unloading into the factory beans then roasted at 350 degrees centigrade. When rosted completely crasher use to crash the beens and liquid chocolate come out from inner part.
This illustration
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the process of chocolate production from seeds to factory.

Coco plant seeds are
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used
to produce chocolate. After harvesting the pods white coco beans
are fermented
, and place under the direct sunlight where they become dry due to heat of sun after that packed in large sacks for transportation towards factory.

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After
unloading into the factory beans then roasted at 350 degrees centigrade. When
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rosted
completely
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crasher
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use to
crash the
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beens
and liquid chocolate
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come
out from inner part.
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IELTS academic How to produce chocolate from Coca Pods

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3 paragraphs
83 words
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Coherence and Cohesion: 6.5
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