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This figure demonstrates the growing pattern of a type of plant over a cycle that involves different processes.

This figure demonstrates the growing pattern of a type of plant over a cycle that involves different processes. Xolng
This figure demonstrates the growing pattern of a type of plant over a cycle that involves different processes. There are a total of eight stages along the process, which begin with planting seeds and culminate in the form of growing plants with fruit. In the beginning stage, some seeds of a unique plant species became ready for the following stage to be buried under the moist soil, and then some water is added. In the next step, the planted seeds are passed through the germination period to be sprouted, in which the sprouts of the flowers have turned into seedlings over the period of a week. At the Following stage of the seedling, the plants are grown enough to have buds, which they are ready to be expanded into flowers with beautiful pink color over three days. Finally, the attractive petals fell after several days, and the plant's fruit became visible and ready to be served.
This figure demonstrates the growing pattern of a type of
plant
over a cycle that involves
different
processes.

There are a total of eight
stages
along the process, which
begin
with planting seeds and culminate in the form of growing
plants
with fruit.

In the beginning
stage
,
some
seeds of a unique
plant
species became ready for the following
stage
to
be buried
under the moist soil, and then
some
water is
added
. In the
next
step, the planted seeds
are passed
through the germination period to
be sprouted
, in which the sprouts of the flowers have turned into seedlings over the period of a week.

At the Following
stage
of the seedling, the
plants
are grown
enough
to have buds, which they are ready to
be expanded
into flowers with
beautiful
pink color over three days.
Finally
, the attractive petals fell after several days, and the plant's fruit became visible and ready to
be served
.
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