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We are living in an increasingly developing 4.0 technology era, in the future artificial intelligence (AI) will change the entire life of people. To become a global citizen, do you think that it is necessary to practice and develop skills and improve expertise in using technology, especially in the Covid pandemic situation?

We are living in an increasingly developing 4. 0 technology era, in the future artificial intelligence (AI) will change the entire life of people. To become a global citizen, do you think that it is necessary to practice and develop skills and improve expertise in using technology, especially in the Covid pandemic situation? OR7BE
With the unexpectedly and dramatically development of technology, there is no doubt in practicing, developing skills and improving expertise in using technology, especially in the covid pandemic situation, There are three reasons why I said that. First, because of covid 19, mainly business from SME to Large should be closed and order their workforces work form home. So the labor must be expert in using computer software of programs which suitable for their jobs. If they do not adapt to that change, they should not meet their deadline and maybe will be fired. Secondly, people nowadays must compete with artificial intelligence – a wholesome package about knowledge, skills that can replace your jobs anytime if you be lazy and do not improve yourself every day through studying. And last but not least, my conception at any time is "Satisfaction lies in the effort, not in the attainment, full effort is full victory". And when you try your best, you can get sweet rewards afterward. For example in this situation, if you nonstop push yourself forward by studying more about technology besides other soft and technical skills, you can get a higher position in your company with a well-paid job. So this is the last thing I want to say for global citizens, "A little more persistence, a little more effort, and what seemed hopeless failure may turn to glorious success". "Do not scare to fail, just never give up and you can be a winner".
With the
unexpectedly
and
dramatically
development of technology, there is no doubt in practicing, developing
skills
and improving expertise in using technology,
especially
in the
covid
pandemic situation, There are three reasons why I said that.
First
,
because
of
covid 19
,
mainly
business from SME to Large should
be closed
and order their
workforces
work form home.
So
the labor
must
be expert in using computer software of programs which suitable for their jobs. If they do not adapt to that
change
, they should not
meet
their deadline and maybe will
be fired
.
Secondly
,
people
nowadays
must
compete with artificial intelligence
a wholesome package about knowledge,
skills
that can replace your jobs anytime if you be lazy and do not
improve
yourself every day through studying. And last
but
not least, my conception at any time is
"
Satisfaction lies in the effort, not in the attainment, full effort is full victory
"
. And when you try your best, you can
get
sweet rewards afterward.
For example
in this situation, if you nonstop push yourself forward by studying more about technology
besides
other soft and technical
skills
, you can
get
a higher position in your
company
with a well-paid job.
So
this is the last thing I want to say for global citizens,
"
A
little
more persistence, a
little
more effort, and what seemed hopeless failure may turn to glorious success
"
.
"
Do not scare to fail,
just
never give up and you can be a winner
"
.

IELTS academic We are living in an increasingly developing 4. 0 technology era, in the future artificial intelligence (AI) will change the entire life of people. To become a global citizen, do you think that it is necessary to practice and develop skills and improve expertise in using technology, especially in the Covid pandemic situation?

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