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Ways of visiting mountain Eron

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The diagram gives information about how to reach mountain Eron in a national park in various ways. Overall, there are several locations to get to the mountain, starting from the cultural center, the sunrise and sunset viewing area. However, the only way to reach Mt. Eron is a climbing track at the bottom of the mountain. It is noticeable that the most direct way to access Mt. Eron is walking from western parking, which is near the toilets and first-aid point. People need to go through this walking track, which interacts with a circular driving track and a circular track, before reaching a climbing track. For people who drive, visitors can park in the North-West or North-East for viewing sunset or sunrise, respectively. Alternatively, people can join the driving track and then go to the mountain on foot after parking in either the South or the West of the mountain. Expect for the driving tracks, they can start from the cultural center to the South-West of the mountain and continue going to the circular walking track.
The diagram gives information about how to reach
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Eron
in a national park in various ways.

Overall
, there are several locations to
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get
to the
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mountain
, starting from the cultural center, the sunrise and sunset viewing area.
However
, the
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only
way to reach Mt.
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Eron
is a climbing
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track
at the bottom of the mountain.

It is noticeable that the most direct way to access Mt.
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Eron
is walking from western parking, which is near the toilets and
first
-aid point.
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People
need to go through this walking
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track
, which interacts with a circular driving
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track
and a circular
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track
,
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before
reaching a climbing
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track
.

For
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people
who drive, visitors can park in the North-West or North-East for viewing sunset or sunrise,
respectively
.
Alternatively
,
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people
can
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join
the driving
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track
and then go to the
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mountain
on foot after parking in either the South or the West of the
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mountain
.
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Expect
for the driving
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tracks
, they can
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start
from the cultural center to the South-West of the
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and continue going to the circular walking
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track
.
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4 paragraphs
176 words
6.0
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