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Life is full of changes. Please discuss a change that had an impact on your life in the last three years. How did you deal with it? What did you learn?

Life is full of changes. Please discuss a change that had an impact on your life in the last three years. How did you deal with it? What did you learn? 5BYDV
There is no secret that 2020 has changed life on our planet. This year brought the notorious Covid-19 virus into our lives. The pandemic has completely changed our habits, working and educating methods, things that we do unhindered daily, and just a way of living. Also, because of the epidemic, most countries were forced to resort to quarantine measures. Only during quarantine, we realized how much we depend on social life and live communication. The lockdown has made people grateful to every day they can wake up and feel healthy; I am no exception. Pandemic made me realize that I need to be closer to people I love and appreciate, help people in need, and how insignificant material things are compared to human life. I used the free time that appeared during the quarantine wisely. Starting from refreshing up learned subjects, I became more interested in the exact sciences. Additionally, outstanding people held conferences that were free to join for all people. During these meetings, I asked many questions and acquired a lot of new information about the IT sphere. Alongside self-education, I tried to maintain my sports skills. Additionally, I have started leading my school's sports team. Despite the quarantine, I became even more communicative. The main thing that I have learned during a pandemic is that I need to be grateful to my every day and spend as much time as possible with people I love and take care of them. Now that the epidemic declines, we need to be flexible and adapt to the new circumstances. I believe that our lives will go back to a normal state very soon.
There is no secret that 2020 has
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changed
life on our planet. This year brought the notorious Covid-19 virus into our
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lives
. The pandemic has completely
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changed
our habits, working and educating methods, things that we do unhindered daily, and
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just
a way of living.
Also
,
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because
of the epidemic, most countries
were forced
to resort to
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quarantine
measures.
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during
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quarantine
, we realized how much we depend on social life and
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live
communication.

The lockdown has made
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people
grateful
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to every day
they can wake up and feel healthy; I am no exception. Pandemic made me realize that I
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need
to be closer to
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people
I
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love
and appreciate,
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help
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people
in
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need
, and how insignificant material things
are compared
to human life.

I
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used
the free time that appeared during the
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quarantine
wisely
. Starting from refreshing up learned subjects, I became more interested in the exact sciences.
Additionally
, outstanding
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people
held conferences that were free to
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join
for all
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people
. During these meetings, I asked
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many
questions and acquired
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a lot of
new information about the IT sphere. Alongside self-education, I tried to maintain my sports
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skills
.

Additionally
, I have
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started
leading my school's sports team. Despite the
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quarantine
, I became even more communicative. The main thing that I have learned during a pandemic is that I
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need
to be grateful to my every day and spend as much time as possible with
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people
I
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love
and take care of them.

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Now
that the epidemic declines, we
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need
to be flexible and adapt to the new circumstances. I believe that our
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lives
will go back to a normal state
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very
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IELTS academic Life is full of changes. Please discuss a change that had an impact on your life in the last three years. How did you deal with it? What did you learn?

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