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The diagram highlights the process by which tomato ketchup is made.

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The diagram highlights the process by which tomato ketchup is made. This process can be divided into 2 stages: Harvesting tomatoes and producing ketchup. There are 15 steps in the process, from categorizing tomatoes to enjoying junk food. To begin with, the staff starts collecting tomatoes and puts these in the basket. After that, these tomatoes will be categorized by the staff to select good and bad tomatoes, and there is a truck, which will deliver these to the manufactory. Before being thrown into the container, these staff will remove three parts of tomatoes, which are stalk, seeds, and skin. Subsequently, tomatoes will be crushed into a liquid substance, and then they will put sugar, vinegar, and salt respectively into the container. Following this, tomatoes will be boiled and left in two hours. The next step is that these bottles will be replenished by the container, which is used to make ketchup. After labeling these bottles, the staff will approve the quality of these ketchup bottles, after which these will be put into the box and delivered to supermarkets. Finally, this commodity will be served as a sauce to enjoying with fast foods.
The diagram highlights the process by which tomato
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ketchup
is made
.

This process can
be divided
into 2 stages: Harvesting tomatoes and producing
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ketchup
. There are 15 steps in the process, from categorizing tomatoes to enjoying junk food.

To
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begin
with, the
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staff
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starts
collecting tomatoes and puts these in the basket. After that, these tomatoes will
be categorized
by the
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staff
to select
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good
and
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bad
tomatoes, and there is a truck, which will deliver these to the
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manufactory
.

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Before
being thrown
into the container, these
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staff
will remove three parts of tomatoes, which are stalk, seeds, and skin.
Subsequently
, tomatoes will
be crushed
into a liquid substance, and then they will put sugar, vinegar, and salt
respectively
into the container. Following this, tomatoes will
be boiled
and
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
left
in two hours. The
next
step is that these bottles will
be replenished
by the container, which is
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used
to
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
make
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ketchup
. After labeling these bottles, the
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staff
will approve the quality of these
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ketchup
bottles, after which these will
be put
into the box and delivered to supermarkets.
Finally
, this commodity will
be served
as a sauce to enjoying with
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fast
foods.
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