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Tabard Towers Theme Park Last year

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The given line graph illustrates the monthly variation of visitors to Tabard Towers Theme Park in the last year. In general, it can be seen that the number of visitors witnessed an upward trend during the stipulated period. The first four months shows a gradual increase in the visitor's number as it went from 30, 000 to approximately 45, 000. This was followed by a sharper increase in May. However, the month of June experienced a tumble
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line graph illustrates the monthly variation of visitors to
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Tabard
Towers Theme Park in the
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last year
.
In general
, it can be
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seen
that the number of visitors witnessed an upward trend during the stipulated period. The
first
four months
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shows
a gradual increase in the visitor's number as it went from 30, 000 to approximately 45, 000. This
was followed
by a sharper increase in May.
However
, the month of June experienced a tumble
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