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wave energy machine establishing

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Wave is found recently a most effective way of energy conservation. One way to create energy from wave is Wave energy machine. In which machine generate energy from the tidal wave of the river. As shown in the diagram the machine based on turbine, a generator and air flow chambers. The wave direction could be found before to establishing the machine. As water level increase the air flow in upward direction. As the turbine is rotating it generates energy into the chamber. Now the most important part is establishing of machine. As dependency on the high and low output one could install the machines. Also it could depend on the installation cost. If large energy required one have to put for high output and large waves are concern, also the cost of installation will be high. And if low output is required small waves are concern and low installation cost would be found. So on basis of requirements locations of wave energy machine would be decide. So the location could be choose so wisely so that all requirements of nearby city could be fullfilled. Lastly wave is a natural resourse which have its own dependncy like, railfall, wave direction, wind etc. So all these constraint should also be taken while establishing wave energy machines.
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is found
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energy
conservation. One way to create
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energy
from
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wave
is
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Wave
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energy
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machine
. In which
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machine
generate
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energy
from the tidal
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wave
of the river. As shown in the diagram the
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machine
based on turbine, a generator and air flow chambers. The
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wave
direction could
be found
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before
to establishing the
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machine
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water level increase the air flow in upward direction.
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the turbine is rotating it generates
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energy
into the chamber.

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the most
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important
part is establishing of
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machine
. As dependency on the high and low output one could install the
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machines
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energy
required one
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have to
put for high output and large
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waves
are concern,
also
the cost of installation will be high. And if low output
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small
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waves
are concern and low installation cost would
be found
.

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on basis of requirements locations of
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wave
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energy
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wisely
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wave
is a natural
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resourse
which have its
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own
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dependncy
like,
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railfall
,
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wave
direction, wind etc.
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all
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IELTS academic wave energy machine establishing

Academic
  American English
4 paragraphs
214 words
6.0
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 7.0
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Lexical Resource: 5.0
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Grammatical Range: 6.5
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