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The given diagram illustrates various steps in which electricity is manufactured by using coal and oxygen.

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The given diagram illustrates various steps in which electricity is manufactured by using coal and oxygen. In particular, it can be seen that the process start with pumping down coal and oxygen and undergoing various chemical processes to generate electricity for consumption. In the first step, coal is transported by conveyor belt to the power plant, where it is mixed with oxygen and burned in a furnace. After the heating process, raw syngas is produced. Next, harmful substances such as carbon dioxide, mercury, and sulfur are removed. After the impurities are removed, the purified gas is used for the gas turbine starting process. As a result, the turbine powers the generator and creates electricity. Besides, there is a hot exhaust gas generated from the gas turbine. Then, they are directed to a heat recovery steam generator, where the heat is converted into steam. The steam is then used to activate the steam turbine, which is again used to generate electricity
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diagram illustrates various steps in which
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electricity
is manufactured
by using coal and oxygen.

In particular
, it can be
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seen
that the
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process
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start
with pumping down coal and oxygen and undergoing various chemical
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processes
to generate
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electricity
for consumption.

In the
first
step, coal
is transported
by conveyor belt to the power plant, where it
is mixed
with oxygen and burned in a furnace. After the heating
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process
, raw
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syngas
is produced
.
Next
, harmful substances such as carbon dioxide, mercury, and sulfur
are removed
. After the impurities
are removed
, the purified
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gas
is
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used
for the
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gas
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turbine
starting
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process
.
As a result
, the
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turbine
powers the generator and creates
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electricity
.
Besides
, there is a hot exhaust
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gas
generated from the
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gas
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turbine
. Then, they
are directed
to a heat recovery steam generator, where the heat
is converted
into steam. The steam is then
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used
to activate the steam
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turbine
, which is again
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used
to generate
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electricity
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IELTS academic The given diagram illustrates various steps in which electricity is manufactured by using coal and oxygen.

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159 words
6.0
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