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Water used in differsectors of the world

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These pie charts illustrates the percentage of water used in agricultural sector domestic sector and industrial sector in different continents of the world. There is a large percentage disparity in some countries for ex agricultural use in asia and africa is dominated more than europe and north america. In north america 48% of the water is used in industrial sector where as just 12% is used by south east asia on the other hand we can see that 13% and 39% of water is used in the domestic and agricultural sector respectively by north america and 7% and 12% by south east asia. As we can see africa and central asia has almost same usage as africa uses 84% in agricultural, 9% in domestic and 7% in industrial in comparison to central asia which uses 88%, 7%, 5% in agricultural domestic and industrial use respectively. Overall, water usage in agricultural use is more dominated in the west continents whereas the east continent used less water on agricultural use except south america.
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