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Raw materials recycled from 1982-2010

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This graph illustrates the percentage of recycled raw material like paper and cardboards, glass containers, aluminium cans and plastics from 1982-2010 in a particular country. There is a rapid increase in recycling of aluminium cans and plastics can be seen increasing consistently but slowly. In 1982 65% of the paper and cardboard was recycled. the fig fluctuates before rising to 80% in 1994. from then it decreased to 70% in 2010 in 1982 50% of the glass containers were recycled and then the fig stoop low to 40% in 1986 the rate gradually increases to 60% in 2010. the recycling of aluminum cans started increasing from 1982 starting from 2% to 45% throughout the years. the recycking of plastic however had a slow rise starting from 2% to 8% but increased on a consistent rate overall, paper amd cardboard were recycled the mosf at 80% in 1990 however the growth decreased after that whereas the other material had an upward rise.
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recycled
raw material like paper and
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cardboards
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aluminium
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cans
and plastics from 1982-2010 in a particular country.

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aluminium
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cans
and plastics
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can
be
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rising to 80% in 1994.
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decreased to 70% in 2010

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1982 50% of the glass containers were
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and then the fig stoop low to 40% in 1986 the rate
gradually
increases to 60% in 2010.

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the
recycling of aluminum
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increasing from 1982 starting from 2% to 45% throughout the years.

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the
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of plastic
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had a slow rise starting from 2% to 8%
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overall
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at 80% in 1990
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