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Water used for different purposes in six areas

Water used for different purposes in six areas 70Qab

The given paragraph gives us a comprised report on water distribution for different purposes in six areas of the world. The areas include North America, South America, Wurope, Africa, Central Asia and South east Asia. Water used for industrial purpose is significanyly higher in Europe and North America than the rest of the areas, each with 53% and 48% respectively. Central Asia and Africa have the least usage of water for industrial purposes. A large percentage of water is used for agricultural use in Central Asia, South East Asia and Africa. We can see that the water used for agricultural purposes makes up more than half of the total water usage in areas excluding North America and Europe. The percentage of water usage for domestic use in all areas is comparatively lower than industrial use and agriultural use, with the highest distrbution of merely 19% in South America. Additionally, we can also discern from the charts that a large amount of water goes in agricultaral use. Thus, we can surmise that the amount used for Agricultural use and industrial use is seemingly higher than for domestic use.

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