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The diagram below shows how a household solar water heater works

The diagram below shows how a household solar water heater works ewme7
The picture illustrates information about how solar water heater produced energy and provide domestic areas. Overall, it can be seen that the process involve 3 steps. Which is namely solar panel, pump and coil. Looking at the frist stages of the diagram, it is clear that frist the solar energy collected by solar panels from the sun. And then absorb power passed through a pipe in a coil. Next, the current passed in pump to solar collector. Which was boiled in the tank and heat the power. After that, The bolied powerd turned in to solar twin coil cylinder throgh a pipes. On the other hand, the process following the next step is heated power stored in cylinder and pump through the power again back to the solar panel. However, the stored enrgey divided in to two parts hot water and cold water. While the hot water removed through the taps upper site and the cold water supply to consumed for individuals in domestic areas. finally, the energy used by differnt typ of household chores.
The picture illustrates information about how
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solar
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heater produced energy and provide domestic areas.
Overall
, it can be
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seen
that the process involve 3 steps. Which is
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solar
panel, pump and coil. Looking at the
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frist
stages of the diagram, it is
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clear
that
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frist
the
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solar
energy collected by
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panels from the sun. And then absorb
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power
passed through a pipe in a coil.
Next
, the
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current
passed in pump to
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collector. Which
was boiled
in the tank and heat the
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power
. After that, The
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bolied
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powerd
turned in to
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twin coil cylinder
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throgh
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a pipes
.
On the other hand
, the process following the
next
step
is heated
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power
stored in cylinder and pump through the
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power
again back to the
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panel.
However
, the stored
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enrgey
divided
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in to
two parts hot
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and
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cold
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. While the hot
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removed through the taps upper site and the
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cold
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supply to consumed for individuals in domestic areas.
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finally
, the energy
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