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water consumption in the world

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At the beginning, the agriculture rise slightly from 500 to 1000 between the year 1900 to 1950, when the industrial and domestic use leveled off. However the farming climb rapidly to 3000 in the year 2000, which is the high-test, comparing to industrial use by 1200 in 20 century and domestic use by 500 in 20 century. Looking at the water consumption of two countries in the table, the number of population, irrigated land and water use per person in Brazil are all higher than Congo. As show in the table, the water use in Brazil is 40 times over Congo. The part of irrigated land, Brazil is 265 times larger than Congo. The water consumption per person in brazil is much higher than that of Congo by 359 cubic meter and 8 cubic meter separately.

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