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Water use in Gulf countries 2000(%)

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The table compares six Arabian countries in terms of water consumption in the year 2000 and data has been calibrated in percentages. Overall, it's a apparent that, in all six countries the water was used primarily in agriculture and household besides industry was less water used section in six countries. With regards to Kuwait the amount of consumed water in section domestic comprises 63 %, which surpasses all five countries in this field. Bahrain, which was ranked second in this section with 53%. Both countries used far less water in industry however agriculture was slightly higher that Bahrain at 39% and Kuwait at 19%. It is also worth noting that the figures for Oman and Saudi Arabia in agricultural sector were nearly equal 83% and 85% respectively. Interestingly, Qatar and United Arab Emirates also had almost the same ratio in this field with 62% and 65% correspondingly. United Arab Emirates saw the lowest point in industrial sector compared to other countries which was 2%.
The table compares six Arabian
countries
in terms of
water
consumption in the year 2000 and data has
been calibrated
in percentages.
Overall
, it's
a
apparent that, in all six
countries
the
water
was
used
primarily
in agriculture and household
besides
industry was less
water
used
section in six countries.

With regards to
Kuwait the amount of consumed
water
in section domestic comprises 63 %, which surpasses all five
countries
in this field. Bahrain, which
was ranked
second in this section with 53%. Both
countries
used
far less
water
in industry
however
agriculture was
slightly
higher that Bahrain at 39% and Kuwait at 19%.

It is
also
worth noting that the figures for Oman and Saudi Arabia in agricultural sector were
nearly
equal 83% and 85%
respectively
.
Interestingly
, Qatar and United Arab Emirates
also
had almost the same ratio in this field with 62% and 65%
correspondingly
. United Arab Emirates
saw
the lowest point in industrial sector compared to other
countries
which was 2%.
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IELTS academic Water use in Gulf countries 2000(%)

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