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Describe the difference between given two maps

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The given map proposed a number of alteration in the village of stokeford between 1930 and 2010. To embark with, the northern region of map, the farmland on the east of bridge had completely devastated, where the new house had constructed(similarly, the all shop was converted in order to build new home for residents). The primary school for pupils had reconstructed with the enhancement of area, for education of small children. Else, bridge and post office had not gone with any drastic change. Moving further towards the south of map, the farmland in behind to the post office branching off in description to form a rectangular attractive chain of houses, which further going at the adjacent side of river stroke. Moreover, the residential area for retired person had been made, in 2010, at place of gardens as well as of a large house. While, there was an undeveloped area at both sides of river stroke, in 2010. Looking from an overall perspective, it is readily apparent that there had been many chance occurs between the given years in 2010, where some places were completely demolished and new things were established.
The
given
map proposed a number of alteration in the village of
stokeford
between 1930 and 2010.

To embark with, the northern region of map, the farmland on the east of bridge had completely devastated, where the new
house
had constructed(
similarly
, the all shop
was converted
in order to build new home for residents). The primary school for pupils had reconstructed with the enhancement of area, for education of
small
children. Else, bridge and post office had not
gone with
any drastic
change
.

Moving
further
towards the south of map, the farmland in behind to the post office branching off in description to form a rectangular attractive chain of
houses
, which
further
going at the adjacent side of river stroke.
Moreover
, the residential area for retired person had
been made
, in 2010, at place of gardens
as well
as of a large
house
. While, there was an undeveloped area at both sides of river stroke, in 2010.

Looking from an
overall
perspective, it is
readily
apparent that there had been
many chance
occurs between the
given
years in 2010, where
some
places were completely demolished and new things
were established
.
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