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The diagram below depicts the, the volumes of male and female genders, perusing higher studies in United Kingdom, on full-time and part-time basis for the three decades from 1970 to 1990.

The diagram below depicts the, the volumes of male and female genders, perusing higher studies in United Kingdom, on full-time and part-time basis for the three decades from 1970 to 1990. YRm3Q
The diagram below depicts the volumes of male and female genders, perusing higher studies in the United Kingdom, on a full-time and part-time basis for the three decades from 1970 to 1990. Overall, the total number of students proceeding with higher studies had been increased over the stipulated period, with a considerable hike in full-time studies, resulting in slightly higher growth in the female segment. In the 1970s’ the total number of male students stand at just over 1. 1 million, while it recorded the lowest part-time student numbers in comparison to other 02 decades. Further, the full-time male student numbers had steady growth from approximately 100, 00 to over 250, 000. On the other hand, female student volumes had gone up continuously, recording almost 1. 2 million students registering for part-time studies while, slightly over 0. 2 million students for full-time. Moreover, it shows a trend of increase of that, women getting into further studies, in comparison to men, illustrating a total growth of approximately 300, 000 student numbers during the 03 decades illustrated in the given bar chart.
The diagram below depicts the volumes of male and female genders, perusing higher
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in the United Kingdom, on a full-time and part-time basis for the three decades from 1970 to 1990.

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of
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proceeding with higher
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the stipulated period, with a considerable hike in full-time
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studies
, resulting in
slightly
higher growth in the female segment.

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of male
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students
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1. 1 million, while it recorded the lowest part-time
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in comparison
to other 02 decades.
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had steady growth from approximately 100, 00 to
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volumes had gone up
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registering for part-time
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, illustrating a total growth of approximately 300, 000
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during the 03 decades illustrated in the
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IELTS academic The diagram below depicts the, the volumes of male and female genders, perusing higher studies in United Kingdom, on full-time and part-time basis for the three decades from 1970 to 1990.

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