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The bar chart below shows the amount of money invested in each category from five organizations. Summary the information and make comparison where relevant.

The bar chart below shows the amount of money invested in each category from five organizations. Summary the information and make comparison where relevant. lXxXJ
The bar chart illustrates the allocation of 5 organizations’ investments in four categories, including machinery, building, staff training, and research. Regarding machinery, each organization invests from 0. 8 to 1 billion euros in it, while there was an exception with organization C in which the investment is higher, at 1. 3 billion euros. According to building, organization A and B spend more money on, 1. 5 and 1. 4 billion euros respectively whilst 3 remain organizations spend an exact amount of money at 1 billion euros. In terms of staff training and research, organization B has the highest investor with 1. 9 and 1. 6 billion respectively. Organization A is the second-largest investor in staff training when they spend 1. 2 billion on this field while research has the second-highest investment of organization C which reaches 1. 3 billion euros. By contrast, these fields in organizations D and E are only invested under 1 billion euros for each sector. Overall, the priority of investments is different in each organization. In addition, organization B invests more heavily than others while the investment of organizations D and E is the lowest.
The bar chart illustrates the allocation of 5
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in four categories, including machinery, building, staff training, and research.

Regarding machinery, each
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invests from 0. 8 to 1
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euros in it, while there was an exception with
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C in which the
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is higher, at 1. 3
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A and B spend more money on, 1. 5 and 1. 4
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respectively
whilst 3 remain
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spend an exact amount of money at 1
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In terms of staff training and research,
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B has the highest investor with 1. 9 and 1. 6
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.
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A is the second-largest investor in staff training when they spend 1. 2
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on this field while research has the second-highest
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of
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C which reaches 1. 3
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D and E are
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D and E is the lowest.
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IELTS academic The bar chart below shows the amount of money invested in each category from five organizations. Summary the information and make comparison where relevant.

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