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Describe a diagram shows that orange juice produce.

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The provide process chart illustrate that how orange juice is manufactured by various purpose. Overall, All steps are necessary for producing the orange juice. One step will be missed and process are stopped. According to the data, fresh orange reduced the factory and they can washing the orange juice. Moreover, the extraction and aolid waste age of orange and curtain the animal feed. Meanwhile, then extraction is prepared by fresh juice than packaging as well as sale the supermarket and fresh juice with the aid of machine and the refrigerated truck was remove the evaporation water. Meanwhile, the fresh juice was concentrated that prepared the juice of proper canning than eliminate the warehouse as well as the factory and water was packaging in orange juice that sale the supermarket in different places.
The provide process chart illustrate that how orange
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juice
is manufactured
by various purpose.
Overall
, All steps are necessary for producing the orange
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juice
. One step will
be missed
and process are
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stopped
. According to the data,
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fresh
orange
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reduced
the
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factory and
they can
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washing
the orange
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juice
.
Moreover
, the extraction and
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aolid
waste age of orange and curtain the animal feed. Meanwhile, then extraction
is prepared
by
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fresh
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juice
than packaging
as well
as sale the supermarket and
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fresh
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juice
with the aid of machine and the refrigerated truck was remove the evaporation water. Meanwhile, the
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fresh
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juice
was concentrated
that prepared the
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juice
of proper canning than eliminate the warehouse
as well
as the factory and water was packaging in orange
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juice
that sale the supermarket in
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different
places.

IELTS academic Describe a diagram shows that orange juice produce.

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132 words
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