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water usage in San Diego, California and the rest of the world

water usage in San Diego, California and the rest of the world JwDrw

Three pie charts belows show the rate of water used for residential purposes, industry and agriculture by people in San Diego, California and the rest of the world. From an overall perspective, the majority of water in two states of USA is used for homes while people in the rest use it for industrial and agricultural purposes. In San Diego, two-thirds of water usage is for households, comparing with nearly 40% in California and 8% in the global. Oppositing with San Diego and California, global citizens often use water for agriculture with the rate of 69%, comparison with only 17% and 28% in San Diego and California. There is not too much differences when we compare the figure for water consumption in industry. San Diego County and worldwide has the same proportion (23%) while the rate of California is 10% higher, about one-third.

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