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The given diagram details the process of the life cycle of one specific species which is called salmon. Overall, this is a step-by-step process that is comprised of three stages. initially, almost after about 6 months, fries came out of the salmon eggs where are located under the reeds near the small stones. The size of fries is about 3-8cm. Then it can be seen that smolts have stayed on the lower river for about 4 years. moreover, they become bigger and their size reaches about 13 -15 cm. During the final stage of the process, in the ocean adult salmons with 70-76cm width have lived approximately 5 years. Finally, these salmons again try to breed and reproduce eggs and have been tried to maintain their generation.

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 the process of the life cycle of one specific species which is called
 salmon.

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, this is a step-by-step process that Did you mean "comprises" or "consists of" or "is composed of"?comprisesconsists ofis composed of
is comprised of
 three stages. This sentence does not start with an uppercase letterInitially
initially
, almost after about 6 months, fries came out of the salmon eggs where are located
 under the reeds near the This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:tiny
small
 stones. The size of fries is about 3Insert a space between the numerical value and the unit symbol "-8 cm"-8 cm
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. Then it can be This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :witnessed
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smolts
 have stayed on the lower river for about 4 years. This sentence does not start with an uppercase letterMoreover
moreover
, they become bigger and their size reaches about 13 -15 cm.

During the final stage of the process, in the ocean adult salmons with 70Insert a space between the numerical value and the unit symbol "-76 cm"-76 cm
-76cm
 width have This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :resided
lived
 approximately 5 years. Finally
, these salmons again try to breed and reproduce eggs and have been tried
 to maintain their generation. 