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The bar chart illustrates the numerical information regarding the export value from one particular country and the table demonstrates the percentage of change in each category, between 2015 and 2016. Overall, it is noticeable that petroleum products and engineered goods had the highest export earnings whereas textiles were the least one which had approximately 25$ billion in the year of 2015. Interestingly, the value of textile had the highest increase which is 15. 24% from 2015 to 2016. Focusing on export incomes, approximately 60 billion dollars of petroleum merchandizes and engineering equipments were exported. Following by gems and jewellery, and agricultural products which were above 40$ billion and 30 $ billion, respectively. Turning to percentage change in value, the majority of product had an increase in value vary from 0. 81% of agricultural products to 15. 24% of textile. Meanwhile, jewelry industry has a slightly decrease of 5. 18% in export earning.
The bar chart illustrates the numerical information regarding the
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export
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value
from one particular country and the table demonstrates the percentage of
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change
in each category, between 2015 and 2016.

Overall
, it is noticeable that petroleum
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products
and engineered
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goods
had the highest
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export
earnings whereas textiles were the least one which had approximately
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25$
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billion
in the year of 2015.
Interestingly
, the
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value
of textile had the highest increase which is 15. 24% from 2015 to 2016.

Focusing on
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export
incomes, approximately 60
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billion
dollars of petroleum
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merchandizes
and engineering equipments
were exported
. Following by gems and
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jewellery
, and agricultural
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products
which were above
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40$
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billion
and
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30 $
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billion
,
respectively
.

Turning to percentage
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change
in
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value
, the majority of
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product
had an increase in
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value
vary from 0. 81% of agricultural
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products
to 15. 24% of textile. Meanwhile, jewelry industry has a
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slightly decrease
of 5. 18% in
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export
earning.

IELTS academic Bar chart information export

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152 words
6.0
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