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The diagram illustrates the generation of wave energy and location

The diagram illustrates the generation of wave energy and location GMyNx
The diagrams depict the design and location for wave-energy gadget. It can be clearly seen from first diagram, The waves are came into the machine from east which ups the level of water in operating system then, the air flow from upside and downside pressures the turbine, Besides this, There are two chambers which also moving, In this way with the flow the turbine generates through electric generator. Moving to the second diagram, There are two types of machines are located according to the flow of water, Firstly, The small waves machines have low output which also get minimum cost for it's low installation, Whilst, In the western coast, There is enormous waves taken machine made which give high output similarly, it taken major amount for structuring. Overall, the machine of wave energy is complicated which works according to the need.
The diagrams depict the design and location for wave-energy gadget.

It can be
clearly
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seen
from
first
diagram, The
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waves
are
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came
into the
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machine
from east which ups the level of water in operating system then, the air flow from upside and downside pressures the turbine,
Besides
this, There are two chambers which
also
moving, In this way with the flow the turbine generates through electric generator.

Moving to the second diagram, There are two types of
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machines
are located
according to the flow of water,
Firstly
, The
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small
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waves
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machines
have low output which
also
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get
minimum cost for it's low installation, Whilst, In the western coast, There is enormous
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waves
taken
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machine
made which give high output
similarly
, it taken major amount for structuring.

Overall
, the
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machine
of
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wave
energy
is complicated
which works according to the need.
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IELTS academic The diagram illustrates the generation of wave energy and location

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  American English
4 paragraphs
141 words
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