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Water-Filter Assembly system

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The diagram shows a simple system for treating dirty water to clean water. According to this diagram, in fact, after about four to five stages, the incoming water is filtered and removed from the storage drum. Water purification in this system, as I mentioned before, goes from the five sections: sand filtering, charcoal and gravel to the above storage drum section. Then, after staying in the plastic barrel for a while, it is transferred to another bucket, which is considered as a kind of outlet water tank. This compact water purification system can be very useful for short and medium term uses. Of course, in this diagram, there is not much information about the duration of optimal use of the municipal water filtration system or the type of water inlet to the device or information about the source of sand and other materials used in this system or the time to enter and exit water nothing was mentioned. We hope that by using such innovative systems, we will be able to enjoy clear and refreshing drinking water.
The diagram
shows
a simple
system
for treating dirty
water
to clean
water
. According to this diagram, in fact, after about four to five stages, the incoming
water
is filtered
and removed from the storage drum.
Water
purification in this
system
, as I mentioned
before
, goes from the five sections: sand filtering, charcoal and gravel to the above storage drum section. Then, after staying in the plastic barrel for a while, it
is transferred
to another bucket, which
is considered
as a kind of outlet
water
tank. This compact
water
purification
system
can be
very
useful for short and medium term
uses
.
Of course
, in this diagram, there is not much information about the duration of optimal
use
of the municipal
water
filtration
system
or the type of
water
inlet to the device or information about the source of sand and other materials
used
in this
system
or the time to enter and exit
water
nothing
was mentioned
. We hope that by using such innovative
systems
, we will be able to enjoy
clear
and refreshing drinking
water
.
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IELTS academic Water-Filter Assembly system

Academic
  American English
1 paragraphs
177 words
6.0
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 5.5
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