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The given map show information of existing house plan and future house plan

The given map show information of existing house plan and future house plan 7WV52
Academic task 1The given maps chart illustrate the information about the exiting ground floor paln or proposed changes for house work. Overall, it can be seen in proposed changes the hall will be no large because it is marged with the living room. In detail, the internal door will be build on the top in north side. Then, the kitchen will be constructed in west wing and added internal wall in both house, but the kitchen furniture is added in future house near the kitchen. After that, hall will be removed in proposed changesvanf internal walls will be changed to double doors and moved to the bottom right side, near about south entrance door. Moreover, the storage under stairs will be built in previous plan, but in future plan its will be removed to free some space needed for the spiral stairs and internal walls also removed
Academic task 1The
given
maps chart illustrate the information about the exiting
ground floor
paln or
proposed
changes
for
house
work.
Overall
, it can be
seen
in proposed
changes
the hall will be no large
because
it is
marged
with the living room. In detail, the
internal
door will be build on the top in north side. Then, the kitchen will
be constructed
in west wing and
added
internal
wall in both
house
,
but
the kitchen furniture is
added
in future
house
near the kitchen. After that, hall will
be removed
in proposed
changesvanf
internal
walls will be
changed
to double doors and
moved
to the bottom right side, near about south entrance door.
Moreover
, the storage under stairs will
be built
in previous plan,
but
in future plan
its
will
be removed
to free
some
space needed for the spiral stairs and
internal
walls
also
removed
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IELTS academic The given map show information of existing house plan and future house plan

Academic
  American English
1 paragraphs
146 words
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Coherence and Cohesion: 5.5
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