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The graph illustrates of questionnaire’s result on giving the cases why people choose the capital city of an exact country and move to it.

The graph illustrates of questionnaire’s result on giving the cases why people choose the capital city of an exact country and move to it. drxoP

The graph illustrates of questionnaire’s result on giving the cases why people choose the capital city of an exact country and move to it. The overall trend for the period is of an increase in the numbers of people changing their places of living for a particular country and city from 2000 to the 2015 year. In particular, the highest number is people who find a job abroad and need to change their place of living because of that. In 2000 there were only more little more than 60, 000 people moving for employment. By 2010, its numbers skyrocketed to over 90, 000 and after reaching a peak steadily decreased to approximately 89, 000 by 2015. The study reason for moving among people experienced the most dramatic change during these 15 years. Although it has some fluctuations between 2000 and 2015, by the end of the given period it reached the same number is employment reasons, around 89, 000. As for relatives/friends and adventure reasons for moving to another country, they both had the same pattern in increasing steadily through the whole period, starting at more the 10, 000 they reached around 22, 000 and approximately 15, 000 respectively by 2015. In conclusion, the graph shows us a great trend for studying and employment reasons for moving abroad, and steep growth for two other reasons.

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people
 choose the capital city of an exact country and This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :relocate
move
 to it.

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numbers
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people
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number
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people
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change
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because
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only
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little
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people
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moving
 for employment. By 2010, its You use this word too often, consider replacing it withsumtotalfigurestatistic
numbers
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reason
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moving
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people
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end
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given
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number
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, around 89, 000. As for relatives/friends and adventure You use this word too often, consider replacing it withlogicreasoningsense
reasons
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moving
 to another country, they both had the same pattern in increasing steadily
 through the whole period, starting at more the 10, 000 they reached around 22, 000 and approximately 15, 000 respectively
 by 2015.

In conclusion
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shows
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reasons
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moving
 abroad, and steep growth for two other You use this word too often, consider replacing it withlogicreasoningsense
reasons
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