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water cycle how it works and describe the diagram

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The given Diagram depicts the continuous cycle of water and gives information about how it works. There are four to five stages before water cycle restarts. Examine the First stage, the water which causing by rain starts to move towards to sea, most of the water flow travels through river and other flow of ground water which passes in between porous rock and non-porous rock: and it goes in to the lakes, rivers and seas. Some of the water carried out by downstream the river. In the second stage, water is evaporation from seas, lakes and rivers cause of sun's excessive heat. After that, invisible water vapor flows in the wind and with cold wind it formed in clouds. Subsequently, these clouds are spread by winds in different areas where they cool down and eventually rain cause. This process continuous going on throughs the year. Overall, it can be said that the main factor of this process is sun which heats the water and then it became a vaporise clouds which generate rain.

The This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :accorded
given
 Diagram depicts the continuous cycle of You use this word too often, consider replacing it withdrinkrain
water
 and gives information about how it works. There are four to five stages This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:previouslyprior to
before
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water
 cycle restarts.

Examine the First
 stage, the You use this word too often, consider replacing it withdrinkrain
water
 which causing by rain This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :initiates
starts
 to This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :relocate
move
 towards to sea, most of the You use this word too often, consider replacing it withdrinkrain
water
 flow travels through river and other flow of ground You use this word too often, consider replacing it withdrinkrain
water
 which passes in between porous rock and non-porous rock: and it goes in to the lakes, rivers and seas. If the text is a generality, 'of the' is not necessary. Did you mean "some"?Some
Some of the
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water
 carried out by downstream the river.

In the second stage, You use this word too often, consider replacing it withdrinkrain
water
 is evaporation from seas, lakes and rivers cause of sun's excessive heat. After that, invisible You use this word too often, consider replacing it withdrinkrain
water
 vapor flows in the wind and with This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :chillyfrosty
cold
 wind it formed in clouds. Subsequently
, these clouds are spread
 by winds in This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:various
different
 areas where they cool down and eventually
 rain cause. This process continuous going on Possible spelling mistake found.throughtroughs
throughs
 the year.

Overall
, it can be said
 that the main factor of this process is sun which heats the You use this word too often, consider replacing it withdrinkrain
water
 and then it became After 'a', do not use a verb. Make sure that the spelling of 'vaporise' is correct. If 'vaporise' is the first word in a compound adjective, use a hyphen between the two words. Note: This error message can occur if you use a verb as a noun, and the word is not a noun in standard English.
a vaporise
 clouds which generate rain. 