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Sea level predictions of the future

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The graph depicts the sea level predictions of the future from 2000 to 2100 by estimating the past. For the representation of sea level, sea level change is taken on Y-axis and year is taken on X-axis. Overall, it is predicted that the sea level will rise rapidly between 2050 and 2100 which has been done by considering the past data. The sea level change in the year 1800 to 1850 was about -90 mm. However, the projections of the sea level by the year 2100 was nearly 500 mm. To begin with, the sea level change was increasing with increase in time. It has been predicted that there is an increase in the sea level during 2050 to 2100. Moreover, sea levels will arise more than 500 mm in the coming year as well. It can be concluded that the sea level was increased drastically in the year 2100 than 1800.
The graph depicts the
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predictions of the future from 2000 to 2100 by estimating the past. For the representation of
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,
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change
is taken
on Y-axis and
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year
is taken
on X-axis.

Overall
, it
is predicted
that the
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will rise
rapidly
between 2050 and 2100 which has
been done
by considering the past data. The
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sea
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level
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
change
in the
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year
1800 to 1850 was about -90 mm.
However
, the projections of the
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sea
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level
by the
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2100 was
nearly
500 mm.

To
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begin
with, the
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change
was increasing with increase in time. It has
been predicted
that there is an increase in the
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sea
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level
during 2050 to 2100.
Moreover
,
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levels
will arise more than 500 mm in the coming
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as well
. It can
be concluded
that the
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was increased
drastically
in the
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2100 than 1800.
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IELTS academic Sea level predictions of the future

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7.0
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