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The charts provide information about students in 2007 who were happy with different facilities at a university of UK.

The charts provide information about students in 2007 who were happy with different facilities at a university of UK. BM9bj
The given pie charts illustrate a comparative study regarding the percentage of students who were happy with three different facilities in university of the United Kingdom in 2007. Overall, it can be clearly seen that the postgraduates students were happy in school rooms and university cafeteria which were the highest, whilst undergraduates students were not satisfied with school facilities, which were lower than post graduates. To commence with, both undergraduates and postgraduates students were identical with school rooms at university which were about a quarter not satisfied 62-63% very satisfied and 13-14% percentage quite satisfied respectively. In terms of university cafeteria, the proportion of under and postgraduates students were not happy and quite happy, which were 26-11% undergraduates and 22-16%postgraduates. While, more than half of undergraduates and 73% postgraduates students were very satisfied with the facilities of university cafeteria. With regard to school facilities, it was not satisfied by undergraduate students which was a small minority (1%). However, the percentage of postgraduates students were not happy with the school facilities, which were higher than undergraduates and it was 25 %. Moreover, school facilities, both under and postgraduates students were quite happy and very happy with it, which was 40-32 % and 85-43 % consequently.
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