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Average CO2 emissions in European countries

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The chart depicts the average CO2 emissions per person across four different European countries from 1975 to 2015. At the first glance, it can be seen that France has a steady decrease of CO2 emissions between 1975 and 2015, whereas, Greece have shown an rise in the CO2 emissions just under six metric tons. In comparison, Spain's carbon dioxide emissions increased steadily from four metric tons to about eigth metric tons. Norway have shown a significant reduction in it's carbon dioxide emissions which is close to the emissions produced by Greece in 2015. However, It can be seen that no matter a steady drop in CO2 emissions, France is still the top country to emit CO2 emissions. Greece being at the bottom of CO2 emissions.
The chart depicts the average CO2
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per person across four
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European countries from 1975 to 2015.

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that France has a steady decrease of CO2
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between 1975 and 2015, whereas, Greece have shown
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under six metric tons.
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increased
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Norway have shown a significant reduction
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which is close to the
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produced by Greece in 2015.
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that no matter a steady drop in CO2
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, France is
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. Greece being at the bottom of CO2
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