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The diagram illustrates the process of generating energy through the waste incineration.

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The diagram illustrates the process of generating energy through waste incineration. Overall, this man-made operation consists of 5 main stages, all of which rely on the waste being engulfed in flame. First of all, disused products are thrown into a pit of fire located inside a boiler. The waste acts as a stimulant, empowering the burning capability of the flame, which is essential to produce a massive amount of steam. After being destroyed by fire, the leftover waste declines by around 80% to 98% and can be reused to create newer substances like vitrified glass, recycled materials, and common acids. As for the hot air, some of it flies to the steam drum that leads to turbines. Once the high-temperature gas arrives at the turbines, the energy generator is triggered and starts producing much-needed power. Meanwhile, the remaining steam, which is called exhaust, exits the boiler and flows into a filter through a transparent pipe. Subsequently, the exhaust travels to a scrubber, then to another filter before being fully recovered and stored for future usage. During such phase, ash is emitted and contributes to the solid matter.

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 incineration.

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, disused products are thrown
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 to create newer substances like vitrified glass, recycled materials, and common acids.

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