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Water consumption of 2 countries

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The line graph illustrates global water usage in various sector fields by world. Whereas, the table depicts water used by Brazil and Congo in the year 2000. In 1990 to 1930s water consumed at constant pace of 5000km². From 1940s it gradually increased upto 3000km² which was highest among the two. Whilst industrial area and domestic use of water was about to negligible constant till 1940. Since from 1950 to 2000, there was slightly inclined in both these areas about 9000km² and 3000km² respectively. In contrast, Brazil had the highest population of 176 millions which used land for cultivation was about 26, 500km² whilst the people in Congo was 5. 2 millions. However, land covered for irrigation it was about 100km². There was huge gap between the water consumption of 350m²Overall, most of the water used by the agricultural sector by Brazil in 2000
The line graph illustrates global
water
usage in various sector fields by world. Whereas, the table depicts
water
used
by Brazil and Congo in the year 2000. In 1990 to 1930s
water
consumed at constant pace of
5000km
². From 1940s it
gradually
increased
upto
3000km
² which was highest among the two. Whilst industrial area and domestic
use
of
water
was about to negligible constant till 1940. Since from 1950 to 2000, there was
slightly
inclined in both these areas about
9000km
² and
3000km
²
respectively
.
In contrast
, Brazil had the highest population of 176 millions which
used
land for cultivation was about 26,
500km
² whilst the
people
in Congo was 5. 2 millions.
However
, land covered for irrigation it was about
100km
². There was huge gap between the
water
consumption of
350m
²
Overall
, most of the
water
used
by the agricultural sector by Brazil in 2000
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IELTS academic Water consumption of 2 countries

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