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The line chart compares the rate of money spent in five types of goods and service in a country in Europe from 1960 to 2000

The line chart compares the rate of money spent in five types of goods and service in a country in Europe from 1960 to 2000 73p5A

The line chart compares the rate of money spent in five types of goods and service in a country in Europe from 1960 to 2000It is clear that there was a considerable increase in the proportion of spending on transport whereas the figures for food, leisure, clothing and fuel significantly declined. Additionally, while the rate for food experienced a dramatic change, the quantity of fuel was far lowest during the research periodIn 1960, the percentage of expenditure on food was highest at just under 35%, while the figure for leisure was significant lower, at around 20%. By the contrast, the money allocated for clothing made up 10%, compared to approximately 9% of transport. The spending on fuel only accounted for about 6% and was lowest in the same period. In the year 2000, the rate of expenditure on transport sustantially rose to about 15%, became the highest figure of five catogories whereas the quantity of food saw a quick decrease at only roughly 14%. The figures for leisure, clothing and fuel gradually fell to about 11%, 5% and 3, 5% respectively

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