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The given bar diagram gives the information about the amount of money spent on six goods in four European countries.

The given bar diagram gives the information about the amount of money spent on six goods in four European countries. Dwa6k

The bar diagram gives us the idea about the amount spent on six goods in four European countries like Germany, Italy, France, Britain. In an overview, we can say that Britain is the country which spend the maximum in buying different things. Italy and France spend equal amount of money in purchasing toys. Among the four European countries Britain maintains the highest position in buying almost all goods. Photographic film is the most selled good. The people from Britain have spent almost 170 thousand pounds in buying that. But their lack of interest can be seen from the graph. Even though Britain is the highest, they spend only 150 thousand pounds in buying it. The same amont of money have spent in Tennis racquets. The point in which the Italy and France met is toys. They spend the equal amount of money in buying toys. These both countries spend the amount of 159 pound in that.

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