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The line graph illustrates how many tones of wheat were exported in five years of Australia, Canada, and the European Community.

The line graph illustrates how many tones of wheat were exported in five years of Australia, Canada, and the European Community. WnG55
The chart illustrates how much wheat was exported from Australia, Canada, and the European community from 1985 to 1990. Overall, there was a decrease in the number of wheat exports in Australia, while the opposite was true for the European Community, and that of Canada witnessed fluctuations. In addition, Canada exported the highest proportion of wheat before being surpassed by the European community in the final year. First and foremost, the number of wheat exports in Australia was lowest in 1985, at only 15 million tonnes, despite a slight growth in the next year, it kept falling until reached a low at just over 10 million tonnes in 1990. The opposite patterns can be seen in that of the European community, which varied around 15 tonnes until 1988, then rose sharply to approximately 21 tonnes, making it the largest figure at the end. Meanwhile, about 19 tonnes of wheat was exported by Canada in 1985, with a subsequent slight decline before incredibly growing to reach a peak of 25 tonnes in 1988. After that, this data experienced a drop of roughly 10 tonnes and a final growth to just under 20 tonnes in 1990.
The chart illustrates how much
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wheat
was exported
from Australia, Canada, and the European
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community
from 1985 to 1990.

Overall
, there was a decrease in the number of
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wheat
exports in Australia, while the opposite was true for the European
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Community
, and that of Canada witnessed fluctuations.
In addition
, Canada exported the highest proportion of
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wheat
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before
being surpassed
by the European
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community
in the final year.

First
and foremost, the number of
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wheat
exports in Australia was lowest in 1985, at
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only
15 million tonnes, despite a slight growth in the
next
year, it
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kept
falling until reached a low at
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just
over 10 million tonnes in 1990. The opposite patterns can be
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seen
in that of the European
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community
, which varied around 15 tonnes until 1988, then rose
sharply
to approximately 21 tonnes, making it the largest figure at the
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end
.

Meanwhile, about 19 tonnes of
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wheat
was exported
by Canada in 1985, with a subsequent slight decline
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before
incredibly
growing to reach a peak of 25 tonnes in 1988. After that, this data experienced a drop of roughly 10 tonnes and a final growth to
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just
under 20 tonnes in 1990.
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IELTS academic The line graph illustrates how many tones of wheat were exported in five years of Australia, Canada, and the European Community.

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