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The bar chart below represent literacy ranges with area and gender in the year 2011. Generally, The first significance different is showed between Central Asia zone and Sub-saharan Africa location that accounted highest or lowest figures in the whole period. There are two colors in this chart, the green one is belong to male also the purple is depend on feminine, the vertical axis used for percentages and the horizontal for regions. The Central Asia and Central Eastern Europe had the most knowledge rates in the year 2011 nearly a hundred percent for both gender while in the other positions there are not equally for male and female. There are the greater gaps in soth and west Asia as well as sub-saharan Africa at the same time moreover about 10 to 20 percentage more for male. The lowest percentages of literacy rates is in the Sub-saharan Africa about 70% for male and 60% for female, additionally, there is 30% difference between this area and the zone with the most literacy rate in Central Asia. In brief, the information given shows that the males had a number of literacy rate than feminine at the year told.
The bar chart below represent
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Eastern Europe had the most knowledge
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in the year 2011
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soth
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is in the
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